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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2012-02-20 05:39 AM

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whisper into my ear
words not heard before
make them wicked as bathtub gin

place your moist mouth wherever you want
give unto me that which you have

electrify my soul as you please my other
you, the power plant of my desire

(wicked bathtub words float o'er
the subconscious passageway of my id)

strip off the last remaining censored thoughts
press almost cruelly your lips to mine
until they become one

©February 17, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (02-20-2012 08:21 AM).]

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2012-02-20 06:15 AM

lava hot love words there Jerry! Wow! Gonna blow the top off of somebody's volcano....

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-02-20 06:16 AM

I hope they do, Lori, they're from the heart, that's for sure.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

3 posted 2012-02-20 09:41 AM

Wicked bathtub words, love that. Very nice, indeed.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2012-02-20 10:08 AM

Thanks, Nicole, I appreciate you being here.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

5 posted 2012-02-20 08:16 PM

How did I miss this one, JP.
Your poem is a gift of passion.
Always enjoy your words, JP,
Ms. E

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2012-02-20 08:31 PM

Thank you, Ms. E, you are always welcome here with your positive outlook on things.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Amberzlynnc
Member

since 2010-08-24

Posts 229
New Jersey

7 posted 2012-02-21 09:18 PM

Beautiful and sexy! Well written. Enjoyed.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2012-02-21 09:20 PM

You kind words are appreciated, Amberzlynnc, thank you for being here.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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