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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Forgotten  We watch soft shadows from crescent fade to morning; Prairies our bedrock. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Nice haiku, Bob, especially the middle line. That was a good call. ~*~ I know a guy who's addicted to brake fluid. He says he can stop any time. ~*~ |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Poignantly, heart-quiveringly beautiful, Bob. Owl |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Thanks Jerry and Diana, At first, when I was writing this, my mind was not in the toilet but on the moon and, Diana, I think you captured that part of my poem, thank you, and, Jerry, um, well, you know what you captured. Anyways, thank you's so much to both!  |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I'm with Jerry on the middle line Bob. And prairies are in my blood. You Haiku with the best of them! lori |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine imagery ... both photographic and poetic! |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Thanks Lori and Bruce... Lori, that your reply comes from the heart of a prairie girl from Kansas means that much more. Thank you. Bruce, ...and, your reply coming from one who extrudes imagery, WoW! Thanks so much! I appreciate you both! |
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