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Open Poetry #48

What Time is It?

Dakota
Member

since 2000-05-25

Posts 125
New York

0 posted 2013-04-12 09:31 PM

What time is it?
For I am torn.
Is it time for Joy?
Or Time to Mourn?

So Much Death Surrounds.
I Know not what to Feel.
Emotions Abound.
Life is so surreal.

Should I find joy in the reuniting,
of souls destined to be together?
Should I dwell upon the Sorrows,
of those left behind forever?

How to scale the chasams wall.
Down so deep, nowhere to fall.
Impaled by Heartache, emotionally tied.
Imprisoned by a tomb, of the feelings inside.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-04-12 09:40 PM

Dark poetry. I like dark poetry, so I like this.

quote:
So Much Death Surrounds.
I Know not what to Feel.
Emotions Abound.
Life is so surreal,

That just about says it all. Life is truly surreal.

~*~ Jokes about German sausages are the wurst~*~

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

2 posted 2013-04-12 10:31 PM

I thinks this is more saddness than dark. Nicely done!
Kat >^..^<

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

3 posted 2013-04-15 12:06 PM

quote:
Should I find joy in the reuniting,
of souls destined to be together?

Yes!

Enjoyed? Yes!

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