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OwlSA
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0 posted 2013-04-10 05:25 PM


STOLEN MINUTES
6 April 2013

I stole from Father Time
and concrete jungle pressures
and weighty responsibilities
and pounding duties
and rewarding commitments
and the work I love passionately
but that enslaves me
and shrieks for all-night unpaid overtime
to

feel

and I wrote
a poem
and whilst
I

feel

guilty
for doing that
I know
I am
not.

Owl

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (04-13-2013 11:08 AM).]

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jwesley
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1 posted 2013-04-10 09:08 PM


Couldn't have said it better unless I was you, my friend!!  Much enjoyed.

j.

OwlSA
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2 posted 2013-04-11 01:55 AM


Thank you, Jimmy.  Smiles.

Owl

Lighthousebob
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3 posted 2013-04-11 07:16 PM


I think I know what you mean... I also stole a few and wrote you a poem.

Owl

I hope you enjoy it!  

OwlSA
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4 posted 2013-04-11 07:48 PM


Thank you for your reply, Bob.  Smiles.  I will go and look at your Owl poem now.

Owl

Sunshine
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5 posted 2013-04-13 11:12 AM


To feel the concept of the weighty words of a poem from the soul...is to know that you've shared all you can, until the next one rolls in.

Hugs, Karilea


OwlSA
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6 posted 2013-04-13 05:32 PM


Thank you, Karilea, for your kindness and compassion.

Hugs
Owl

Michael
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7 posted 2013-04-14 02:28 AM


Oh how I wish I could get back all the unwritten poems that died in my head because I couldn't/wouldn't stop what I was doing long enough to jot something down.  I applaud you for doing it.

Michael

OwlSA
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8 posted 2013-04-14 03:37 AM


Thank you, Michael.  That is so sad.  I wish you had written them down too.  Perhaps, some of them slipped through as new poems later, unbeknown to you.  

Once, I wrote either 7 or 9 (I can't remember which, off the top of my head without looking it up in a poem, whose title I don't remember) poems in one day, and then lost them all the same day because of an error on my computer's or my part (I can't remember the exact reason).  However, as they were still so fresh in my mind, I remembered the subjects of all except 2 of them, and got them down again, probably word for word, but if not, close.  I couldn't remember even the subject of the other 2, and it felt like 2 deaths.  

Owl

Krawdad
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9 posted 2013-04-14 04:53 PM


Steal as much as you can.  
OwlSA
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10 posted 2013-04-14 05:28 PM


Giggles, Ed.  Thank you for the good advice and support!  

Owl

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2013-04-25 01:32 AM


Nice...James
OwlSA
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12 posted 2013-04-25 03:13 AM


Thanks, James.

Owl

OwlSA
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13 posted 2013-04-26 11:56 AM


Oops!  I forgot to thank you, Karilea for editing the title inside the thread to be all caps, lol!  Thanks, Karilea.

Owl

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