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OwlSA
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0 posted 2013-04-07 09:37 AM



FULL BLOOM
5 April 2013

We are the innocence
of our childhood,
the enthusiasm of our youth,
the productivity of our middle years,
and the wisdom of our old age.

Let us wrap all those flavours,
in multi-hued bonbon papers,
of the glorious and fragile moment
and savour the enchantment,
for,
as fast as a butterfly’s wing flutter,
we will be
only a memory
or not.

Owl

© Copyright 2013 Diana van den Berg - All Rights Reserved
secondhanddreampoet
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1 posted 2013-04-07 08:18 PM


fabulously well said !
gilead
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2 posted 2013-04-07 08:29 PM


Hello, Owl. It is good to read you again. May it be more than a memory---this fluttering of fragile wings.

Love --- Art

gilead
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3 posted 2013-04-07 08:30 PM


Hello, Owl. It is good to read you again. May it be more than a memory---this fluttering of fragile wings.

Love --- Art

niteismyday
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4 posted 2013-04-07 08:45 PM


I very much enjoyed this read. Nicely portrays the many stages of one's life, and the memories of which we attain.

-nimd

OwlSA
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5 posted 2013-04-08 02:23 AM


Thank you, Bruce!

Thank you, Art.  I hope so, for all of us.  It is good to see you back again.  

Thank you niteismyday.  I am glad you enjoyed it.


Owl

[This message has been edited by OwlSA (04-08-2013 04:06 AM).]

latearrival
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6 posted 2013-04-09 12:42 PM


That is really beautiful and says it all so nicely. jo
OwlSA
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7 posted 2013-04-09 03:15 AM


Thank you, Martyjo.  Smiles.

Owl

Lighthousebob
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8 posted 2013-04-09 05:37 PM


...or not.  


... is all fine and dandy, as long as there remains bonbons!

OwlSA
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9 posted 2013-04-09 06:07 PM


Smiles, Bob.  Thanks.

Owl

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2013-04-10 12:54 PM


Very nice...James
OwlSA
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11 posted 2013-04-10 02:06 AM


Thanks, James.

Owl

Marchmadness
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12 posted 2013-04-20 05:19 PM


or not. Wonderful poem, Diana.
                             Ida

OwlSA
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13 posted 2013-04-21 05:06 AM


Yes, you hit bull's eye with that one, Ida.  Thank you.

Owl

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