Love Among the Mighty Oaks

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2013-04-07 07:24 AM

your come-on look
sky-high-heels beating out a tattoo
on my brain
luring me toward your walls of flesh
making it perfectly clear
nothing is more important than amour
among the mighty oaks
enchanted, the forest uses the whispering wind
to touch our souls
sensuality taken to new heights
poets have carved their undying love
on the trunks of the towering oaks
the forest
with its unseen eyes watching
waiting and sniffing
for scent of the intruders
behind the eyes are simple survivalist
survival their only instinct
death they fear not
for they think of it not
survival and prolonging their tribes existence
as we merge
a spine-tingling shadows
makes my lover's earthen borne lustful flesh
completely absorb mine
the sounds of the forest
unheard of until this moment
comes alive; rustling within the shadows
flying things, earth-bound centipedes
grass and a cooling wind
as we lick our bodies
into a saliva-induced sheen
while in the stream beside us
fish ogle
the world is left behind
all that matters
all that can possibly matter
is the merging of two fleshly beings
as the weeping willow does its thing
and the shadows keep still
watching two lonely bodies become
as one . . .
beneath the canopy of the mighty oaks

©March 30, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ I tried to catch some fog. I mist. ~*~

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

1 posted 2013-04-07 12:16 PM

Ah, love and nature go hand-in-hand, and you've captured it well, Jer. This sent me on a trip down memory lane to when I first met my Linda and we spent the weekend at Dome Rock, and then the Sequoia's. Nature has a magical quality. Enjoyed this.

Michael

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2013-04-07 12:50 PM

Thanks, Michael, I'm happy my poem stirred happy memories for you.

~*~ I tried to catch some fog. I mist. ~*~

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

3 posted 2013-04-09 12:08 PM

Ah, affaire d'amour! Hey, you know it's gotta be good, as your poem is good, and, especially, out in the woods whenever 'fish ogle'! Enjoyed!

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2013-04-09 12:13 PM

I caught that damn peeping tom fish and fried him up in some hot grease . . . Heh.Heh . . . Thanks Bob . . .

~*~ Jokes about German sausages are the wurst~*~

EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

5 posted 2013-04-10 09:49 AM

I love the primitive raw feel to this, the combination of nature and desire

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2013-04-10 09:56 AM

Thank YOU, Emma, primitive raw was exactly what I was striving for. So glad you understood and approved.

~*~ Jokes about German sausages are the wurst~*~

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