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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA 
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Now I know what I knew that I would eventually know there was always a win or lose between me and you and where did it begin really? somewhere between realities sake and the delusions we cant shake? the fear .. paranoia between you and I and I always knew what you knew I should know this CAN be a win-win situation between me and you ~~~kingsangel~~~ [This message has been edited by Angel4aKing (04-03-2013 05:59 PM).] |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
...so, um, I suppose the 'lose' is still that he doesn't know for himself what he knew you should know and now you know, but he doesn't. Right? ...or am I confused. Anyways, I enjoyed the word play!  |
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Sue_s Junior Member
since 2013-03-26
Posts 45 |
I, too, enjoyed the word play. I have started a few poems myself, in a similar fashion, but, could never pull it off. You did. Nicely done. Hope he figures it out. (Typo on delusions) Sue |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Thank you both... wordplay does seem to be my forte' ... however I am trying to find a new muse mine seems to be of a negative undertone which I am trying to get a way from ... Again thanks for stoppping by to read this glad you enjoyed!! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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