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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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The sun He arrives earlier lingers longer in robes of ever changing radiant hues Brilliant from consorting with maiden Moon Desires distill in her waning time She sheds her golden gown of beams Stripping slivers as she slowly pirouettes LGR©3/28/13 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Aww, Lori, this is just stupendous. You have the enviable knack of knowing just what words belong where in your poetry. This is an excellent example of that. I can see the "consorting" of Mr. Sun and Maiden Moon perfectly . . . ~*~ I changed my iPod name to Titanic. It's syncing now. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Jerry, thank you for your unwavering support and unrelenting praise. You keep me posting onward. Bless your heart! lori  |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Just lovely!  |
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Sue_s Junior Member
since 2013-03-26
Posts 45 |
Very eloquent writing. Much enjoyed |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Ceinwyn, Thank you for stopping to read my work, I'm happy to see you enjoyed this piece. I appreciate you letting me know. lori |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Sue_s, Welcome to the blue buffet! I'm glad my little piece was to your liking! I think you will enjoy it here! lori |
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