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secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2012-02-18 07:34 PM

         Love and Spring

In this ever-fleeting world
where nothing stands,
wilderness and change
are the only true 'temples'
that suffer no hidden meaning.
When Nature speaks with the
gentle wisdom of silently melting
    snow by moonlight,
walk with the wind through these
empty hills of Winter passing,
wrapped in the flawless peace
of pensive mist and silent shadow,
for here ...  may we meet
on an infinite field of dreams ...
in endless Love and eternal Spring!

                    --- b. e. adams (2/18/2012)

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-02-18 08:05 PM

Superb poetical line by fascinating line, poet.

"pensive mist and silent shadow," . . . Yes. It just doesn't get any better than this . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

luminosity
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since 2005-11-18

Posts 813

2 posted 2012-02-18 10:23 PM

i agree with jerry on this,,,superb!

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2012-02-20 11:21 AM

Your words linger in the mind like beautiful music, Bruce. As good as it gets.
Ida

MICHELMAS
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since 2012-02-15

Posts 305
Lancashire England

4 posted 2012-02-20 11:30 AM

tide and time and the passing of the moon
lovely
Michael

katahdin
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since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

5 posted 2012-02-20 11:59 AM

Beautiful! Enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

katahdin
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since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

6 posted 2012-02-20 12:01 PM

Beautiful! Enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

7 posted 2012-02-20 01:02 PM

beautiful, and so true to my eyes, nature inspired the first human gods, enjoyed

yann

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

8 posted 2012-02-20 03:23 PM

Very, very beautiful, Bruce - every word, image and line.

Owl

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

9 posted 2012-02-21 12:28 PM

for here ... may we meet
on an infinite field of dreams ...
in endless Love and eternal Spring!

How very beautiful! *S*

ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

10 posted 2012-02-21 01:06 PM

Amen--is how this should end.

enjoyed

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

11 posted 2012-02-26 11:49 PM

I agree with ice.

Amen.

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

12 posted 2012-02-27 12:45 PM

A beauty of a poem.
Ms. E

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