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Daddy Goose38
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0 posted 2013-03-26 04:06 PM



The Tyranny of Time


I don’t want to start a conversation
There won’t be time to finish.
I’ve not much to interest you.
I don’t do anything here.
Visiting time has run out.
I’ll never hear from you again.
I’d love it if we can still be friends.
But time has run out, even for that.

Jaime


quiet with Ginny

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Lighthousebob
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1 posted 2013-03-26 09:33 PM


I liked the emotion of your poem. The words you chose were so heavy and exclamatory.  
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