Open Poetry #48 |
Vampyre XL |
LorienLord Member
since 2013-02-03
Posts 55Wisconsin USA |
Vampyre XL Endless dark, no one's in sight You gaze out your window into the night And your heart it does grieve For you no longer believe That one day he will come to take you away So in this dark room you're destined to stay And the years lay heavy on a heart so broken As you wait for the words that will never be spoken Tear stained pages that are too hard to read Will no longer be turned by fingers that now bleed Childish dreams lay scattered on the floor Like so many toys, to be played with no more All the faeries are dead, you can no longer fly No happy thoughts left to lift you up high But I've heard your cry, watched every tear fall Now I've come through your window to answer your call Though I have no shadow and my name is not Pan I will take you away and I'll do what I can So come fly with me deep into the night No stars to guide us, please don't fear the height To a place where the Lost Boys really are lost For to give up your soul is such a small cost To live in a land where you'll never say"never" To me as I hold you and love you forever. V |
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Daddy Goose38 Member
since 2010-09-04
Posts 430obama's a rice paper tiger |
You don't know me ... This evoked such a painful desperate longing in me that it made me loose my composure and cry. I will have to be more careful ... I have to stop ... Jaime quiet with Ginny |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
To me, your poem seems like the beginnings to a real adventure with "a vampire's sort of love" perhaps being a sort of elixir gained for a life transformation. Enjoyed. |
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Sue_s Junior Member
since 2013-03-26
Posts 45 |
"All the faeries are dead, you can no longer fly No happy thoughts left to lift you up high But I've heard your cry, watched every tear fall Now I've come through your window to answer your call Though I have no shadow and my name is not Pan I will take you away and I'll do what I can" Those words will haunt me. |
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