Open Poetry #48 |
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The Miles Between Our Hearts |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! ![]() |
The Miles Between Our Hearts In these immortal hours poised on this cusp of Spring, just before the pure and wondrous dawn, tasting so much of lovely reawakenings and renewal, when hard reality seems so finely uncertain, would that I were the Thief of Time and a master of the universe, who could command some ancient and omnipotent magic to dispel all the miles between our hearts, for every compass, road, and dream in the depths of my very soul point only and irrevocably ... to you. --- b. e. adams (3/23/2013) |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The heart just knows and spans the distance!!! It's a glorious emotion to feel. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Written from a lover's heart, Bruce. The longing, with wistful desires, the despair are all front and center for the reader to digest. Nice work. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
What a noble quest for superhuman ability ... Love. Enjoyed. ![]() |
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MorningStar Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 290Pittsburgh, Pa |
Wow. How very lovely poignant this is! "I'll tell you how the sun rose |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thanks folks ... for you most kind 'comment/reply' postings on this 'write' ! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Beautiful! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
These words shorten the miles between any two hearts, Bruce. Ida |
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