Open Poetry #48 |
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Bereft of Love's Forgiveness |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! ![]() |
Bereft of Love's Forgiveness Beneath the infinite, diaphanous, star-swept canopy of evening mirrored in this lake of dreams, perfect moonlight illuminates the untouched elegance of this deep mountain-forest, where the night wind plays its arboreal symphony to Time and Spring as Nature mends the wrecks of Winter but not those of human hearts bereft of love’s forgiveness. --- b. e adams (3/21/2013) |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yep, you got that right, "love’s forgiveness" usually gets mislaid somewhere along the way. Nice, very nice imaging. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Yep...sometimes happens and sometimes forgiving is as hard or harder than forgetting.. Cool, my friend. j. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
I like the metaphoric relationship you present here between forgiveness and Spring. Very, very nice. ![]() |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Nature mends the wrecks of Winter but not those of human hearts bereft of love’s forgiveness ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Yea that's sad and yet beautifully penned. Nobody does nature in its raw beauty like you do. |
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