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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2013-03-20 11:57 PM



All the Boys In the Band

Paris wasn't waiting
for me, I was waiting
for Paris and
the sweet call
from Ms. Duvall
my Parisian sweetheart,

the one who told me

she couldn't live
without my presense,
but of course she survived
for a fresh encounter
with her favorite lover;
yeah sure...she probably
tells that to
all the boys
in the band.

JamesLee
20March
2013

For my son Gabriel,
who is the manager of
a band that is recording
in Los Angeles this week.
I wish them success. www.Ceasefiremusic.com


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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
1 posted 2013-03-21 06:25 AM


Life is the pits sometimes, James.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2013-03-21 06:36 AM


"yeah sure...she probably
tells that to
all the boys
in the band."  

isn't that the nature of bands and their followers? (at least that is what the news/gossip columns always portray)

M

Victoria
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3 posted 2013-03-21 10:05 AM


Yes Im sure you are right James...I listened to the band...they are really good.
Thanks for posting.

~Victoria

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
4 posted 2013-03-21 10:57 AM


Now this write I really liked...very well done.

j.

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
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California
5 posted 2013-03-21 11:06 AM


Comme ci, comme ça and life goes on... Like a Major Recording Contract!!!!  Go Son!  Enjoyed.  
MorningStar
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since 2009-10-26
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6 posted 2013-03-21 01:04 PM


And I guess that's why they call it the blues...  Enjoyed

"I'll tell you how the sun rose
A ribbon at a time..." - Emily Dickinson

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2013-03-30 11:09 PM


Thank you Jerry, nakdthoughts, Vicoria, jwesley, Lighthousebob and Morning for the wonderful responses...alas no recording contract, just renting the studio for a few days work that hopefully will pay off in rewards...James
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