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Open Poetry #48

Rain, Rain Rain

Duck1946
Member

since 2011-05-16

Posts 84
Nebraska

0 posted 2013-03-19 08:57 PM

When the rain comes down it's fun to walk in puddles.
When you look at the rain it goes fast.
Every day I like to see the rain drops.
It's so fun to look at it.
Sometimes when the rain stops I
like to go outside and play.
Everyday I like to see the clouds
shaped like bunnies.
It is so cool.
My Mom tells me it is time to home.
Then we go to bed,

Typed as dictated to me by Harley-my six-year-old
great-grand daughter.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

1 posted 2013-03-19 11:20 PM

Just excellent, my friend ... keep them coming and just Keep Them

j.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2013-03-20 07:56 AM

Another lovely poem by Harley...Thank you for posting Mr. B...Six is such a cute age.
This makes me think of the little girl on the blue Morton salt box walking with her umbrella in the rain.

~Victoria

I was adored once too.
William Shakespeare

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

3 posted 2013-03-20 07:55 PM

What a wonderful, delightful poem. Um, hey, being shaped like bunnies, maybe the clouds are getting ready for Easter too. Maybe?

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