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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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The bedroom smells of candle wax, Shadows shuffle with foreplay acts. Bed sheets twisted around the two, Cool breeze gentles them as they coo. Goosebumps arise on her soft skin, She whispers something and then grins. He nibbles her ear, a soft bite, In no hurry, they have all night. Musk scent fills the room with their lust, The two seem ready to combust. A nibble here a love lick there, A scorching kiss too hot to bear. The flames of ecstasy are fanned, Clothes are shed, sounds like a good plan. Thrusting, pushing, breath coming fast, Sounds of bliss and making it last. A clinch, a thrilling cry of bliss, As both succumbed to loves' abyss. Short rest, then they do it again, Two souls as one, it can't be sin. Dawn grew near on the window shade, Sated at last, but still they stayed. A short breakfast at a cafe, Then both left their cheating buffet. ©Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Gave me goosebumps. So much for the thrill of it all. Good job, JP~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Appreciate seeing you here, Lori, and I thank you kindly for your kind comments. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Yes everyone should have such a romantic candlelit night. Enjoyed your very sensuous poem Jerry. ~Victoria I was adored once too. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I agree, it's just unfortunate that these two had to go outside their marriage vows to get that romantic dinner. Still, if you can't find romance at home these options are there . . . Thanks Victoria. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Never a dull ending from you. Not that I read them or anything (shy look), but it seems to me you might give Harlequin a real run for the money with this one.  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hah, Harlequin is not my thing, but I guess I've written a few things more or less worthy of them. Thank you Bob for you nice input. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Jerry, you are so bad  ! And you do it so good, too! lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hah! Hi again, Lori, much obliged for the comments you've been giving me. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
Wow, and I thought it was a happy, loving couple...for shame. However the poem was excellent, brimming with passion, yet fatal if found. Enjoyed it very much, nice touch at the end. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Haha! Yeah, I'm a party pooper I guess, Ken, but it does happen, and you betcha it can and sometimes does turn fatal. Thank you for reading and commenting on my poetry. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
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