Open Poetry #48 |
![]() ![]() |
Whilst Love |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869![]() |
Each promise was a seed to reap; roots furrowed deeply in the soul, flourishing abundantly in the heart, with each rosette of love we stole. The vibrant palette of our hearts doth stir, A paradisiacal bouquet; lightly brushstroking a quiet demur, with radiant colors of cabernet. Whilst love lit the candle of our embrace, and vanishing into a memory, drifting like water lilies with no trace; ripples of love became a reverie. Whilst love lit the candle of our embrace, Still, I see the silhouette of your face. I was adored once too. William Shakespeare [This message has been edited by Victoria (03-17-2013 06:52 PM).] |
||
© Copyright 2013 Victoria - All Rights Reserved | |||
BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Whence love lit the candle of our embrace, and time became a memory, flowing into a river with no trace; ripples became a reverie. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I felt the bittersweet longing of what once was. Beautiful writing!!! |
||
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Difficult to shake off those silhouettes, Victoria, and sometimes we never do. I have my own, Nanette, of course. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
||
Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Lori, I see you are awake early out there in California. Nice to hear from you this morning...hugss Jerry...yes and what a pretty name that is...Thank you for peeking in as always. ![]() ~Victoria I was adored once too. William Shakespeare |
||
Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
quote: Though time passes, glimmers do seem to always remain (Sentimental sigh). Enjoyed. ![]() |
||
Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Yes those tortuous memories always linger. Thank you for peeking in...it was so nice to hear your comments again today Bob. ![]() ~Victoria I was adored once too. |
||
EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
Makes me long for a glass of merlot beside a fireplace Real nice romance with an edge thanks for sharing |
||
Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank so much you Emma...nice to hear from you today as always... ![]() ~Victoria I was adored once too. |
||
![]() ![]() |
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |