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Open Poetry #48

Bon Bon Sweet

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2013-03-12 03:57 PM

I sampled an enjoyable delight,
t'was like the taste of French pastry
bon bon sweet melting upon
my tongue;
Savoring the passion,
intoxicating wine
the breath of desire,
and the shangra-la of his smile
was like a summer breeze
upon islands of no return;
but as roving tides rushed in
candlelight drifted
upon gypsy waves
of forbidden love,
lost within the treasures
of the deep blue sea.

~Victoria~

I was adored once too.
William Shakespeare

[This message has been edited by Victoria (03-12-2013 05:51 PM).]

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-03-12 04:37 PM

Such a romantic piece of writing, Victoria . . . the melting of a forbidden love comes to naught . . . except in the memories and smells of yesterday . . .

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2013-03-12 05:14 PM

Thank you Jerry for commenting on my yesterday poem...its easier to write about yesterday as we get older it seems.Reminds me of Paul Mccartneys song.

~Victoria

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2013-03-12 06:00 PM

I feel a wistful blissful in this enticing
and, well worth over a penny for your thoughts, colorful flow. I enjoyed this piece very much. Thank you!

lori

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2013-03-12 06:40 PM

Thank you Lori, I am happy you enjoyed
my words and appreciate your nice comments.

~Victoria

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