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Open Poetry #48

The Kiss of Spring

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2013-03-10 06:35 PM

        The Kiss of Spring

There are whispers on this magic
  night,
in the translucent moonbeams,
velvet shadows, and starlit
  evening calm
that this moment out of time
hangs on the very cusp of change,
with the promise of new love
and the gossamer kiss of Spring.

                   --- b. e. adams (3/10/13)

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-03-10 06:54 PM

Ah . . .

quote:
with the promise of new love
and the gossamer kiss of Spring.

. . . that just says it all, Bruce. Love that first line of whispers too . . . Beautiful all the way . . .

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2013-03-10 06:57 PM

Your words are really like a fresh breeze placing a Spring kiss on the reader's cheeks.

Most beautiful.

Margherita

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2013-03-11 02:02 AM

thanks for the quiet and hopeful words,

yann

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2013-03-11 03:37 AM

Beautiful,Bruce. We are feeling that "kiss of spring" here as well.
Ida

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

5 posted 2013-03-30 11:04 PM

I was looking for some springtime inspiration I will have to ponder this one

~~~kingsangel~~~

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

6 posted 2013-04-03 12:57 PM

...so delicate, so fragile, and beautiful.

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

7 posted 2013-04-05 01:00 AM

Just what we needed for springtime dreaming, Bruce.
Ida

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2013-04-17 02:13 AM

Enjoyed...James

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