Open Poetry #48 |
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Godspeed |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced ![]() |
I built a house there upon a hill- all my love's inside. I run around bare maybe you will come to reside. I keep a light and burn both ends even in the snow. But you were right, we're not friends- with Godspeed, go. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Deeply poignant, dear Dixie. Love can do that indeed, it can let go those who don't want to stay. And that little house you built continues to shine with love ... from your heart. Excellent poem. Love, Margherita ![]() "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Oh my, I so very much relate to this poem. Yes, indeed . . . quote: Yesssssss! ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
superb poem, thanks for the emotion and talent yann |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Beautiful piece, my friend! Wonderful write. j. |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Enjoyed and its always nice to surround yourself with loving people. My feet are always bare...I hate wearing shoes. ha!.. ~Victoria I was adored once too. |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
I liked the simple but wise message, well done |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You are a great poet Dixie~ You have a way with words and wonderful insight. |
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