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Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2013-02-27 10:03 AM

Last night my dream of you came true
in a secret rendezvous
within my mind...

I felt the touch of passions kiss...
the kiss I did so reminisce
within your arms...

And upon the canvas of my dream
I gazed into your eyes of blue,
Someone loved me enough
to paint my dream
with you...

I wonder if you dream of me
in the exhibit
of your mind...
between here and there
a portrait of my smile
and of elderberry hair...

If one night I no longer breathe
the sweet aroma
of gardenia...

I will quietly slip into your dream
and paint upon your lips of wine
a kiss...
and kiss you one last time...

~Victoria~

I was adored once too.
William Shakespeare

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-02-27 10:47 AM

Breathtaking, Victoria, truly breathtaking. Our dreams, they can visit us and give the passion we secretly long for. Oh, yes, I'm a dream survivor also.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2013-02-27 11:18 AM

Thank you Jerry...yes they are mysterious.
Thank you for your sweet comments

~Victoria

I was adored once too.
William Shakespeare

Duck1946
Member

since 2011-05-16

Posts 84
Nebraska

3 posted 2013-02-27 08:23 PM

I don't dream much.
But if you were there, I would make a special point of doing it more often.
I like you talent.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2013-02-27 08:36 PM

Well you never know when I will creep into your dream and say boo and scare you...haa..
Thank you for peeking in tonight.

~Victoria

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2013-03-02 05:33 PM

A delicious dream...James

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

6 posted 2013-03-02 06:11 PM

Thank you James...nice to see you as always.

~Victoria

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

7 posted 2013-03-03 11:34 AM

Wow, so that's what that was --- last night when I woke up feeling so 'delicious' and found my wife snoring . . .

Oh my! Wonder, if i take a sleeping pill real quick, will the experience return?

But, me, I pickup uncompleted dreams generally in the next sleep period or two anyway, so hopefully --- THAT one was INCOMPLETE!!

COOL WRITE, my friend...

j.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

8 posted 2013-03-03 11:53 AM

You are lucky you pick up from where you had left off...I wish I was like that except for the nightmares ha...Thank you Jimmy...nice to hear from you today.

~Victoria

I was adored once too.
William Shakespeare

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

9 posted 2013-03-03 12:17 PM

Very nice. Dreams are the playing fields for the soul.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

10 posted 2013-03-03 01:11 PM

Thank you so much...enjoyed your interpretation of dreams.

and thank your for peeking in today Charlie.

~Victoria

I was adored once too.
William Shakespeare

niteismyday
Junior Member

since 2012-06-19

Posts 35

11 posted 2013-03-03 09:41 PM

This was so beautifully written. I had butterflies throughout the piece. Excellent work.

-nimd

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

12 posted 2013-03-04 08:07 AM

Thank you nimd...I am happy you enjoyed my poem

and thank you for peeking in.

~Victoria

I was adored once too.
William Shakespeare

[This message has been edited by Victoria (03-04-2013 08:54 AM).]

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