Traveling Towards Eternity

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Open Poetry #48

Traveling Towards Eternity

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2013-02-27 12:13 PM

Traveling Towards Eternity

"Within the garden of Love."

I watched the stars above
I soaked in the moon of love.
As you approach me
my heart swoons,
you tell me
you came to give me love
I tell you
I am ready to receive some love,
much more than that
in the garden of love
love is given
and received
and enjoyed
and given
and received
and enjoyed,
becoming a continuous
circle of love
traveling towards eternity.

JamesLee
25February
2013

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2013-02-27 12:32 PM

so true, james, love is exchange, given and received, it is the key of love and happiness, thanks for the beautiful words

yann

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2013-02-27 06:37 AM

Great poem with much inner reflection.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2013-02-27 08:59 AM

Yes the circle of love, isnt that true.
Enjoyed James.

~Victoria

I was adored once too.
William Shakespeare

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