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Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2013-02-24 03:20 PM

An orchid breeze within the night
intoxicates the scent of love,
and peacock butterflies above,
swirls in a garden of delight.

A touch of velvet soft and smooth
causes caramel lips to melt,
upon the nectar of kiss felt,
as whispers of "I love You" soothe.

While purple morning glories beam
within the violet of your eyes,
shining within dawns mango skies,
are salmon blushing in a stream.

~Victoria~

I was adored once too.
William Shakespeare

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-02-24 04:06 PM

The poem was exquisite and lovely!

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (02-24-2013 04:46 PM).]

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2013-02-24 04:23 PM

Thanks so much dear Jerry, Im glad you enjoyed.

~Victoria

I was adored once too.
William Shakespeare

[This message has been edited by Victoria (02-24-2013 04:57 PM).]

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2013-02-24 04:43 PM

You're welcomed.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

4 posted 2013-02-24 10:25 PM

Perfect form ... Like the third verse best ... Salmon blushing ... Cool

Rex

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

5 posted 2013-02-24 11:56 PM

very lovely descriptively exquisite

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

6 posted 2013-02-25 08:38 AM

Thank you Rex...it is a different form for me. I'm happy you enjoyed and thank you for peeking in.

Virginia...Thank you,always nice hearing from you. Hope all is well

~Victoria

ken206573
Member

since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

7 posted 2013-02-26 02:27 PM

It's always a pleasure to read your poetry. I enjoyed each soothing word, very refreshing.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

8 posted 2013-02-26 03:04 PM

Thank you Ken...nice to see you again and thank you for commenting today

~Victoria

I was adored once too.
William Shakespeare

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2013-02-27 12:18 PM

A pleasure to read...James

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

10 posted 2013-02-27 12:37 PM

loves the beautiful images (imagined the salmon jumping...) and the colors of flowers, how delicate and enticing,

yann

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

11 posted 2013-02-27 09:03 AM

Thank you James...always nice to hear from you.

Yann...Thank you so much as it is always nice to hear your sweet comments.

~Victoria

I was adored once too.
William Shakespeare

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