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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2013-02-22 05:08 PM



Hollow,days merge into one,
a chasm has opened, she has gone.
Love deeper than the ocean is black.
her illness has taken her , no coming back.
while i live a part of me has gone.
  Beneath melancholic thoughts
no sun has shone
  
Until i am with them again my soul is stone.

Heartache stabs me now constantly, now she has gone.





[This message has been edited by Goldenrose (02-23-2013 02:06 AM).]

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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2013-02-22 09:22 PM


The unbearable pain and sorrow you write of  is deeply felt....

I am so sorry for your loss, Goldenrose.

latearrival
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2 posted 2013-02-23 12:20 PM


Golden Rose,I feel this deeply.It is always hard to lose a friend or loved one before  we feel it is time.

There are no words of consolation as words alone do not really help. Just know the times together and memories will always stay with you.Sometimes they sustain us,more so as time goes by. Best to you,jo  

Victoria
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3 posted 2013-02-23 10:19 AM


My heart goes out to you Goldenrose and yes in time you will be together again.

~Victoria

Marchmadness
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4 posted 2013-02-23 06:22 PM


So very sad, Phil, I feel every word of this.
                         Ida

EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
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5 posted 2013-02-23 08:09 PM


feeling the thud of this all
well done

secondhanddreampoet
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6 posted 2013-02-23 09:11 PM


I remember the same kind of sadness when the lovely "P.I.P.-land"
'poet' and grand-fine human being, Kathleen 'Kacy' Stafford died.

fine writing as always!

2islander2
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by the sea
7 posted 2013-02-24 01:11 AM


sometimes we can't manage with love, but e never manage without, thanks for the beautiful and sensitive poem,


yann

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