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Open Poetry #48

Until We Are Together.

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

0 posted 2013-02-22 05:08 PM

Hollow,days merge into one,
a chasm has opened, she has gone.
Love deeper than the ocean is black.
her illness has taken her , no coming back.
while i live a part of me has gone.
Beneath melancholic thoughts
no sun has shone

Until i am with them again my soul is stone.

Heartache stabs me now constantly, now she has gone.

[This message has been edited by Goldenrose (02-23-2013 02:06 AM).]

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2013-02-22 09:22 PM

The unbearable pain and sorrow you write of is deeply felt....

I am so sorry for your loss, Goldenrose.

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

2 posted 2013-02-23 12:20 PM

Golden Rose,I feel this deeply.It is always hard to lose a friend or loved one before we feel it is time.

There are no words of consolation as words alone do not really help. Just know the times together and memories will always stay with you.Sometimes they sustain us,more so as time goes by. Best to you,jo

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2013-02-23 10:19 AM

My heart goes out to you Goldenrose and yes in time you will be together again.

~Victoria

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2013-02-23 06:22 PM

So very sad, Phil, I feel every word of this.
Ida

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

5 posted 2013-02-23 08:09 PM

feeling the thud of this all
well done

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

6 posted 2013-02-23 09:11 PM

I remember the same kind of sadness when the lovely "P.I.P.-land"
'poet' and grand-fine human being, Kathleen 'Kacy' Stafford died.

fine writing as always!

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

7 posted 2013-02-24 01:11 AM

sometimes we can't manage with love, but e never manage without, thanks for the beautiful and sensitive poem,

yann

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