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LorienLord
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since 2013-02-03
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Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2013-02-17 09:33 AM



Somewhere between the night and day
I lost my hold on you
and let you slip into the dark
where I could barely hear your heart
then empty shadows taunted me
as the candle slowly died.

So in the cold dark dead of night
I lie awake and count the hours
waiting for the dreamless sleep
to come and hold me in its arms
and carry me into the light
the way you used to do.

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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
1 posted 2013-02-18 12:43 PM


full of grace and sensitivity, very enjoyable read, thanks,


yann


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2013-02-20 11:45 PM


Fine writing...James
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