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Open Poetry #48

LorienLord
Member

since 2013-02-03

Posts 55
Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2013-02-12 06:38 PM

In the dark
an Indiglo moon
illuminates every second
I'm wasting with you.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-02-12 06:54 PM

A full harvest moon
Your image in its center
Beckoning me home

Sorry, couldn't resist, L.L., your forlorn poetry brought the senryu to mind.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Duck1946
Member

since 2011-05-16

Posts 84
Nebraska

2 posted 2013-02-13 11:04 AM

Why don't you spend more time writing poems.
I like this one!

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

3 posted 2013-02-13 03:47 PM

Short, sweet but very cool, I liked.

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