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KJOTT
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0 posted 2013-02-10 08:22 PM


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To speed each quiver up your thigh
Each arc, each shallow gasp and sigh
Là! Je t'aime! Élan! C'est là!
— The rise and fall of paradise

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1 posted 2013-02-11 08:21 AM


Like the title and the poem K. Enjoyed

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jwesley
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2 posted 2013-02-11 09:29 AM


Nice...

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3 posted 2013-02-15 11:26 PM


enjoyed...James
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