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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan

0 posted 2013-02-05 11:48 AM


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Snow falls
Diagonal in a cold
Harsh wind

Imagine it
Living in Russia
The nineteenth century
Year by year slowly
Dragging on

And there are poets
Making rhymes
During bouts of clap
That keep them in

While peasants huddle
By their stoves
In darkened hovels
That know no love

Except for God
Who has not
Yet arrived

Bringing freedom vodka
And a loaf of bread


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OLIAS
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since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa
1 posted 2013-02-05 04:19 PM


Sounds like my local bar.... Without the bread and the clap. Quite atmospheric, I liked.
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2013-02-06 01:24 AM


The way of the world for so many, even now.
You do get to the heart of the matter, John.
                                  Ida

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
3 posted 2013-02-06 08:32 AM


I wish I had asked my grandparents, who were from Russia, what life for them had been like before they came here.  

You always make me think, John.

M

Victoria
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4 posted 2013-02-06 08:58 AM


Like Maureens grandparents my husbands grandparents came from Russia too when they were about twenty. Interesting read.

~Victoria

Be not ashamed of mistakes and thus make them crimes.
Confucius

LorienLord
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since 2013-02-03
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Wisconsin USA
5 posted 2013-02-07 06:56 PM


Reminds me so much of "Mother Russia"....thanx for the memories.
LorienLord
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6 posted 2013-02-07 07:04 PM


Reminds me of "Mother Russia"....thanx for the memories.
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