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My challenge piece Robert Forst
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My challenge piece Robert Forst |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk 
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In the likeness to Robert forst a small fragment of a thought hopefully a grain of sand towards his own beautiful work. The mind most taken. What mind may not the thought be gathered from? The memory may not be gathered from the subconscious? Its all you know the memories, or know the subconscious. As a stranger gathered from the subconscious myself A equal weight of mass to an impression, on passing, I ought to know the little of which I shared with them. I do act, I suppose, like myself, And grew not to form a character But the stage is always stood upon at any point I dwell. But the character is made to take my place The day when strangers become vague acquaintances, And when I answer placed on automatic My mind has left through the upper regions; And I act out the scenes as if they were a play I can waste as I pass on the chance to interact as I please. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Oh, please, continue not to pass on the chance. Your mind is fancifully at play. The rise and fall of your meter is wonderfully reminiscent of Frost. I could feel the stepping through your thoughts as though I'd taken the "road less traveled" with you, and, of course, "it made all the difference." Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Well it looks like you and I posted at the same time...but this is beautifully done. Perfect meter too RS..a fun challenge indeed.  ~Victoria |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Though I am not an expert of Frost's works, I do perceive his style in this. You have done a great job. Margherita |
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