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The Mouthing of Red Spider (VAS Challenge)
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The Mouthing of Red Spider (VAS Challenge) |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The Mouthing of Red Spider (VAS Challenge) An offering of firestorm avulsed the cosmos pouting lips Traverse of arms in seeming hell, one pure white dwarf turned tart ellipse A spider red concurs allure, though Hades not of nectar sips In earnest shed the flowing fire, that distant drawing by desire Intent of song in movement eight, aglow incarnate star struck lyre Burst forth the night sky Red’s attire Then frilly limbs impart by night, addressed in flowing garment bright Dispensed by theme adorned and scarred, along the lip lines mulled delight This nebula so aptly named performs in sight Copyright Kkh 1/27/13 |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
This is great TD..Im glad you joined us with the challenge. Another fun challenge. Nicely done as always. ~Victoria |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Superbly a "diamond" for sure. Ethereal and concrete, figurative and precise. I know I'm not quite coming up with the adjectives I truly want, but I'll claim age and end of flu the cause. Although, more likely it's just the webs fogging my file drawers of vocabulary. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Fantastic, dear TD! I admire your style. Margherita |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
well done fair maid...not bad from a rookie. |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Beautifully done! |
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