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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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 Behold the rainbows in the sky, My heart leapt oh so high; I'll never find that pot of gold, They all say I'm too old; It's alright I say with a sigh, Don't worry I'll not cry! For inside my heart wealth is found, Sometimes it will astound. ©January 1, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This tugs at my heartstrings right now, as your wonderful words come so timely and ... I am reading them while listening to Mozart's "Laudate Dominum". Such a perfect combination, dear Jerry. Thank you for this gift. Margherita  "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Mozart and my poem, such an unlikely combination, but I am very happy it worked for you. Thank you, Margherita. Hope your day is good. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Rainbows are so pretty. What could be prettier then a rainbow. I use to see them all the time when I lived in Hawaii. Nicely done Jerry...young people are looking for that pot of gold and us old people write about the rainbows.  ~Victoria Love is a smoke made with the fume of sighs. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hah! Yeah you're right abut the young looking and the old writing. Thanks, Victoria, for being here. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"For inside my heart wealth is found, Sometimes it will astound." Clever write. Enjoyed, and that last line, I bet it is very true. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Many thanks, JL, for you engaging comments. They are most appreciated. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
One is never too old, JP! Enjoyed, Ms. E |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes indeed, Ms. E, I couldn't agree with you more. Thank you for taking time to read my little poem and comment . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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