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Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2013-01-25 09:07 PM

Crystal blue waters are calling to me,
an ocean of love in your eyes.
I melt within your soft whispers,
and the ebb and flow of the tides.
The fruit of your kiss deliciously sweet;
the nectar of your lips I crave.
I feel the sweet warmth of your body,
flowing over me like a tidal wave.

Wispy locks of your light brown hair
blowing in the midnight winds,
Walking along the sands of the beach,
soft stars in your eyes within;
Crystal blue waters are calling to me,
my reflection in your eyes I see.

~Victoria~

[This message has been edited by Victoria (01-26-2013 12:20 PM).]

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-01-25 09:43 PM

I went back and reread this poetry twice, looking for that tangible I could highlight and muse' way out.

Alas, I know not the correct words to ask my Muse for guidance, May you spend saltwater wishing.

I must stop, I apologize I'm afraid I made a mess out of my comments, and I apologize. Little too much warm red wine.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2013-01-25 09:55 PM

Does that mean you like it haa!!!

~Victoria

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2013-01-26 02:10 AM

Another stop - and another great read.

Love these romantic 'glimpses' / snapshots, Victoria, that you present for our reading pleasure.

CG

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2013-01-26 09:28 AM

Thank You CG. I am happy you appreciate my romantic words...and so nice to hear from you twice in one day.

thank you for your nice comments.

~Victoria

Love is a smoke made with the fume of sighs.
William Shakespeare

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2013-01-26 09:50 AM

So exquisitely romantic, dear Victoria! Makes one wish for youth and holidays and ... romance.

Beautifully written.

Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

6 posted 2013-01-26 10:08 AM

Thank you sweet Margherita...I think the ones not writing romance are the ones having the romance...yes only to be young again but we can dream.

thank you for your sweet comments.

~Victoria

Love is a smoke made with the fume of sighs.
William Shakespeare

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

7 posted 2013-01-27 03:02 PM

I'm with Margherita on this one.
Very warming sentiment.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

8 posted 2013-01-27 03:04 PM

filled with the warmth of love and devotion to its hold.

Beautiful

RS

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

9 posted 2013-01-27 04:26 PM

Thank you J. and RS...so nice to hear from both of you today. Happy you enjoyed.

~Victoria

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