Open Poetry #48 |
Time heals |
EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
When daisies burst through the most frostbitten grounds inevitably, we yield to their offer of comfort |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Beautifully rendered . . . Just perfect. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
An observation of life's struggle,and fulfillment, and as you have aptly stated "Time Heals". Beautiful poem. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Nicely done Emma...a beautiful thought. ~Victoria Love is a smoke made with the fume of sighs. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Exquisite, dear Emma! I just feel like identifying with those daisies ... how do they do it? We are stronger than we might believe. It's true we often find comfort in observing nature's ways. Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Keeper~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Love just a few words that are so right and manage to say it all. Perfect. Ida |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
Thank you for your kind and wonderful replies |
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LucidDreams New Member
since 2012-10-19
Posts 5 |
Put simply, I couldn't help but smile and read it another time through. Thanks for sharing! |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Your words are a gift... enjoying the daisies. Ms. E |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Beautifully put, my friend...I look forward to their blooms... j. |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
I liked this very much. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
enjoyed a lot, fragility and excellence of daisies, regards yann |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
thanks so much for reading and making a comment. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
So few words can create such strong imagry and feeling within me. Like this one, Ms. EmmaRose. Alison |
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david3 Junior Member
since 2013-03-02
Posts 15ohio |
what a talent to put such beautiful emotion in such a space |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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