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EmmaRose
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0 posted 2013-01-25 11:39 AM



When daisies burst through
the most frostbitten grounds
inevitably, we yield
to their offer of comfort

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2013-01-25 11:46 AM


Beautifully rendered . . . Just perfect.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JL
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2 posted 2013-01-25 11:56 AM


An observation of life's struggle,and fulfillment, and as you have aptly stated
"Time Heals".
Beautiful poem.

JL
  

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Victoria
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3 posted 2013-01-25 08:55 PM


Nicely done Emma...a beautiful thought.

~Victoria

Love is a smoke made with the fume of sighs.
William Shakespeare

Margherita
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4 posted 2013-01-26 08:01 AM


Exquisite, dear Emma! I just feel like identifying with those daisies ... how do they do it? We are stronger than we might believe.



It's true we often find comfort in observing nature's ways.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2013-01-26 09:51 AM


Keeper~
Marchmadness
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6 posted 2013-01-28 05:54 AM


Love just a few words that are so right and manage to say it all. Perfect.                    Ida
EmmaRose
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7 posted 2013-01-28 04:38 PM


Thank you for your kind and wonderful replies

LucidDreams
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8 posted 2013-02-07 01:12 AM


Put simply, I couldn't help but smile and read it another time through.  Thanks for sharing!
ebonygirl
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9 posted 2013-02-07 01:53 AM


Your words are a gift... enjoying the daisies.
Ms. E

jwesley
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10 posted 2013-02-10 06:37 PM


Beautifully put, my friend...I look forward to their blooms...

j.

OLIAS
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11 posted 2013-02-10 07:22 PM


I liked this very much.
2islander2
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12 posted 2013-02-13 01:35 AM


enjoyed a lot, fragility and excellence of daisies,

regards


yann



EmmaRose
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13 posted 2013-02-15 07:07 PM


thanks so much for reading and making a comment.
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14 posted 2013-03-10 01:07 AM


So few words can create such strong imagry and feeling within me.  Like this one, Ms. EmmaRose.

Alison

david3
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15 posted 2013-03-10 06:10 PM


what a talent to put such beautiful emotion in such a space
JamesMichael
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16 posted 2013-03-13 11:56 PM


A pleasure to read...James
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