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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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 it was raining torrents we stood there notwithstanding and she . . . with her sweet tongue's effort cleansed my past put a voodoo charm on me teased my blushing with a silken moist trace a ruffled whisper and a kiss which bonds like no other caused my stalwart to falter nearly giving way her lips left my own in a mad fluttering of need touched, but unfulfilled I shivered, reached for her fantastic she was boldly outgoing enfolded me inside her unusual and kiss by tender kiss she fed me her adorable I felt myself glowing with delight and ecstasy it made me incredibly complete before I'd been empty now I surrendered to the emancipation of my passion she brought me from then to now sharing love in the midst of a South Louisiana torrential rainstorm �December 3, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
On the edge, Jerry, but so delicately done! Thank goodness for storms.  Helen |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Good day, Helen. I know it was on the edge, but it just felt good writing it. Thank you for reading and commenting. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"I felt myself glowing with delight and ecstasy it made me incredibly complete before I'd been empty now I surrendered to the emancipation of my passion she brought me from then to now sharing love in the midst of a South Louisiana torrential rainstorm" Man!! Nice writing Mr.! This verse deserves a standing ovation. Excellent. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
JL, thank you very much for your kind observation and comments. Sometimes poems more or less write themselves, this was one of those kind of efforts. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
The lustful storm amid such temptations. Such is the human condition..ahhhhhh |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes indeed, Emma, the word is ahhhhhh . . . I guess that's a word. Heh.Heh I understood it, so it must be . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
teased my blushing with a silken moist trace a ruffled whisper I like the way you write passion Jerry. Nicely done...you should write it more often. Very sensuous photo too. ~Victoria |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you much,Victoria. There may be others of similar nature gracing my part of the boom room in days to come. Thank you for your support. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Nice - to make an understatement...lol. On the edge - yes; sensual - yes. But we always live on the edge of life, whether we realize it or not... And, what I really like is the juxtaposition of the external 'torrential storm' with the apparent internal one...haha. The dynamics and the unpredictability of the storms...got to love them... CG |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hah! You've got that right, CG, we all live on the edge even though some of us would be appalled to find that out, and admit. Thank you for stopping by and visiting, I appreciate it very much. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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