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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2013-01-13 02:33 PM

It came without storm
gusting blustering
shuddering slams
tipping tumbling
blunders bashing
chimes clang clashing
Relentless wind
whistle whines
through cracks
and crevices
Catcalls of mayhem
fill the blackness
with thunderous mysteries
to be solved
in the light of day.
LGR(C)1/13/13

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2013-01-13 02:52 PM

surprising ans splendid, this is quite a story of a wind in an imaginary region, thanks for the delightful read and images,

yann

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2013-01-13 03:39 PM

There is great energy in your writing style. I pictured a cyclone in this one...fine read!
TD

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2013-01-13 06:06 PM

WoW! Such force within these lines and the last three are the kicker for sure. I could feel the torrent of wind . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

4 posted 2013-01-14 02:38 AM

Not sure if all those thunderous mysteries can or will ever truly be solved, but they sure are a pleasure to behold. Haven't had a good thunderstorm out here in quite awhile. I envy you.

Michael

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2013-01-14 11:50 AM

Wind storms visit here often. You've
written a very descriptive depiction
of that event in your, "Hard Wind".
First things I thought of were tumbleweeds,
and dust. Nice writing, Lori!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

ken206573
Member

since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

6 posted 2013-01-14 02:00 PM

The poem was magical, amazing and simply wonderful. i enjoyed each and everyone.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2013-01-14 06:13 PM

The wind you write of is so fierce, it's like Mother nature dressed in a coat of armor.

Loved the visuals, excellent poem Lori~

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