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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Vining Intercession by confession spoke of memory with wings In the subtle connotation of regale and shiny things Intertwining into sifted hand, a lifelong passion’s pose Ready winter for the spring time, and the vining of the rose In discussion, the intention limitless of sovereign self Brought to mind in passing fancy on the route to total health Rapt and writhing, the contriving of the spring beyond the snows Emissary, quite contrary, clings the vining of the rose Revelation, such elation through the gray skies to the blue Hill and yonder, in migration, ponders seasons rendezvous Intersection weather willing, might inspire the seed it sows Ready winter for the spring time, and the vining of the rose Copyright Kkh 1/11/13 |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
concentration, jubilation not a diamond in the rough. I loved your poem, they are always so much fun to read TD. This was great and you really have a way with words. ~Victoria Love is a smoke made with the fume of sighs. |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Loved it! Enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Thank you ladies. I'm having such fun being back and writing again. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
And we are happy to have you back sharing your fun way with words. From one connecticut transplant to another. jo |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Ready winter for the spring time, and the vining of the rose" Another wonderful poem, my friend. Absolutely love that last line! JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You are such a treat to read and I'm so glad you're back, TD. Delightful!!!! |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
This one whirlwinds me. So many thoughts concerning it. I will simply have to simplify my response to... ::saving:: |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: I read your magnificent words with rapt attention, dear Kathleen. This has the scent of mastery. So good to read you again! Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes, indeed, you are a very good poet. Liked the repetition on that one line. As a matter of fact, I too am "Ready winter for the spring time, and the vining of the rose ." Yep. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
This truly warms the senses on this very frosty winter day. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Thank you folks. I sure appreciate your kind words of encouragement. |
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Amberzlynnc Member
since 2010-08-24
Posts 229New Jersey |
I loved this! What a great poem, and it read so smoothly. Thanks for sharing! -Amber |
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