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Open Poetry #48

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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2013-01-11 05:05 PM

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In this quiet
In the half dark
Not yet dawn

You’ve come again
Of your own volition
Nameless though I know you
However changing without form

Oh I have learned
To respect your silence
For its feeling
That most important presence
Focused by absent sound

And I turn within
A someone no one sees
Who only belongs to you

What did I do
To bring you so often
In these my latter years
To let me know you’re here

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[This message has been edited by Huan Yi (01-12-2013 11:03 AM).]

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

1 posted 2013-01-11 08:46 PM

Sounds like you're haunted, but by what or whom? Nicely done.
Kat >^..^<

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2013-01-21 11:51 PM

Fine writing...James

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