the dress of a woman - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #48

the dress of a woman

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2013-01-11 04:20 PM

Her dress had a small angelic touch to it
the way the argyles on each cathedral
use to stop and stare
change their faces from a gothic time
to an angels stare

She wore her dress
for the love of a man
came and went
but the love of a man
came towards her small red ankles
Her red lipstick
that shades the woods
and let her trees feel her ease
so the dress that she wore
angelic, for the frills of a man
came at the peace of a solemn use of the water
the river that ran by her
like the strangers that lost their bridge
for the heart of a woman
never lost her dress
never did she wear it unless the night
brought his firm, battered hands
towards a still painting
of a woven neck
that staked itself against the lake of a shadows plank

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2013-01-13 01:29 AM

very nice, you dare wonderful comparisons wuth river and lake, thanks for the wonderful read,

yann

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2013-01-13 11:45 AM

whoa, you know how I feel about your poetry, it's all so good!!

... your ending was surreal!

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

3 posted 2013-01-14 01:27 PM

Yann-

I'm happy you enjoyed it. Your comments are much appreciated. Take care, my friend.

Cheers

Tomer

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

4 posted 2013-01-14 01:27 PM

Blues-

You're very sweet. I appreciate the kind words and support. Hope you're well.

Cheers

Tomer

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.