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Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2013-01-10 08:29 PM

A deep purple sky sparkles
with jewels of the night shining.
A river of moonlight flows
through bedroom window glowing.
A raven stalks the dark
in shadows of night harking.
The fragrance of the night
blooms like a red rose blooming.
Ebony wind in the trees
upon my window clawing.
In lantern of my dreams
seduction is burning.
Emerald eyes of the dark
creeps like a jewel thief creeping.

Love is a smoke made with the fume of sighs.
William Shakespeare

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

1 posted 2013-01-10 08:37 PM

Your words paint a beautiful picture, enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2013-01-10 08:46 PM

Thank you Kat, it was a fun write. Glad you enjoyed and nice to hear from you.

~V

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2013-01-10 11:38 PM

Very nice write, Ms V.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Duck1946
Member

since 2011-05-16

Posts 84
Nebraska

4 posted 2013-01-11 08:07 AM

A lovely molment captured in your words.
I shall carry those words with me today.
Surely my load has lifted a little because of them.

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

5 posted 2013-01-11 09:28 AM

J. Thanks for stopping by and commenting, always nice to hear from you.

Mr.B. Nice to read your words last night and thank you for your lovely comments.

[This message has been edited by Victoria (01-11-2013 12:35 PM).]

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2013-01-11 11:50 PM

Oh so pretty....the still of the night is is so satiny smooth.... You paint the darkness so eloquently.
So that's your secret, Victoria!!!??/ looking good...girl.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

7 posted 2013-01-12 10:24 AM

Oh thank you Lori. I used to have a dark romance website but that was years ago.It was back in the Book of Poetry days when I first met you. Always nice to hear from you.Hope your new year is a good one so far. Hugs!

~Victoria

Love is a smoke made with the fume of sighs.
William Shakespeare

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2013-03-21 12:35 PM

Shades of the master of the dark, Mr. Poe, you have done yourself well here, Victoria. The title is a masterpiece, never mind the poem itself. I am partial to "dark" poetry, and you delivered enormously with this one . . .

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~

MorningStar
Member

since 2009-10-26

Posts 290
Pittsburgh, Pa

9 posted 2013-03-21 02:14 PM

"Ebony wind in the trees
upon my window clawing.
In lantern of my dreams
seduction is burning"

Just lovely.

"I'll tell you how the sun rose
A ribbon at a time..." - Emily Dickinson

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

10 posted 2013-03-21 03:16 PM

Thank you Jerry...I used to have a dark romance website years ago...glad you enjoyed and thanks for peeking in...I am still working on my new website so I havent had time to write just yet.

MorningStar...thank you for stopping by today and commenting...appreciate your kind words.
~Victoria

I was adored once too.
William Shakespeare

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