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Open Poetry #48

To Vanish out of sight

Gunslinger
Senior Member

since 1999-10-09

Posts 901
TX, USA

0 posted 2013-01-08 12:07 PM

Its funny how, the truth in part-
Is nothing but a lie.
And things one meant to thrill a heart,
Will only make it cry.

And words intended to bring joy,
Always seem to hurt,
And with disaster, my whole life,
I’ve always seemed to flirt.

Decisions made, decisions rued-
To write, or not to write?
Perhaps ‘tis best, and fits my mood-
To vanish out of sight

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2013-01-08 12:21 PM

Oh that first verse does it for me!!

Don't be pulling any vanishing acts, cowboy...ya hear!!

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2013-01-08 04:07 AM

I agree with Blues. You need to stick around, John. Yours is some of my favorite poetry.
Ida

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2013-01-08 09:38 AM

No vanishing tricks, please.

It is always a pleasure to read you, John.

M

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