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Holier Than Thou Crown
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Holier Than Thou Crown |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
Cast me out, Throw me down. Wear that holier than thou crown. Talk about me. Like I'm not around. What makes you better than me? Why are you us and I am them? Cast me out, Throw me down. Wear that holier than thou crown. An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed be. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Good vent!! Great title!! I'll pass on the crown, although some people like the look. Hope it helped to write this out. Poetry is not always pretty, nor should it be. good write, rachel~ |
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Duck1946 Member
since 2011-05-16
Posts 84Nebraska |
Delightful! It's short, crisp,and fun to read. I just read it to my wife and she liked it too. You could add, "Do you think I am some dumb clown." I believe you have just made my day a little brighter. Keep writting, dark days may come, but I'm sure your delightful poems will buck me up. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Because that's all they have... Juju -Juju |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Good and relevent questions asked here that perhaps more of us should ask. It is this holier than thou attitude in this world that creates segregation and promotes hatred, the quicker we lose it the less wars and death we will inflict on fellow humans, afterall we are ALL humans and ALL gods children...thank you for this important write, you could feel your disgust of the attitude within your words....be well... Goldenrose. music was my refuge.i could crawl into the spaces between the notes and curl my back to loneliness - Maya Angelou |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
They sound jealous to me. Nicely done! Kat >^..^< |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
Thank you all for your comments. I was quite angry with my co-workers the day I wrote that. An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed be. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
That's tellin' 'em Rachael. Ida |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
fondamental questionning about communication, the words resonate deep and great; enjoyed a lot and kind of symetry between the "I" and the "you", thanks yann |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
These people like to point you out in order to distract attention where it really belongs, on them. Well done, Ms. E |
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