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Open Poetry #48

The Lonely One

rachaelfuchsberger

Senior Member

since 2007-02-21

Posts 609
Las Vegas, NV

0 posted 2013-01-06 10:29 AM

The lonely one.
One moment here,
The next moment gone.
What once was light,
Now is shadow and dark.
The once social butterfly,
Is now a reserved hermit crab.
Warmth has turned cold.
Beauty become grotesque.
Elegance become burlesque.
She's gone now.
The girl you knew before.
She's not here anymore.
She left somehow.
Never to return.
The lonely one.
One moment here,
The next moment gone.

An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed be.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2013-01-08 06:13 PM

Sad, very sad.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Duck1946
Member

since 2011-05-16

Posts 84
Nebraska

2 posted 2013-01-10 08:44 PM

A lovely,sad poem.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2013-01-10 08:48 PM

Sad but an interesting write.

~Victoria

Love is a smoke made with the fume of sighs.
William Shakespeare

rachaelfuchsberger

Senior Member

since 2007-02-21

Posts 609
Las Vegas, NV

4 posted 2013-01-11 09:26 PM

It IS rather sad when one can feel lonely in a room full of people.

An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed be.

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