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nate15106
Junior Member

since 2013-01-01

Posts 11
Pittsburgh, PA

0 posted 2013-01-01 04:10 PM

I just have the urge to write my thoughts down about this amazing woman I have met. I know it's not the greatest poem...but they are my thoughts


                   Knowing by
                 Nathan McCaskey

I sit here writing my thoughts
Can not hide this feeling any longer
I know it was fate the day we met
I can not and will not ever hold
These feelings back

Knowing after that very first kiss
I have found my true love
And can not take this
Any longer day after day
Sleepless nights are just no longer
Here to stay

For I would give anything for
Just another kiss
A long stare deep into your eyes
The soft touch of your skin

I know the day will come
When we wake to each other
Under a new sun

Knowing all this
Makes me happy

Knowing all these feelings
That burn deep inside
I will no longer be able to hide

That fate is soon to pay
And you will be mine
I long for that day

I hope it is soon
Because I am done
Searching for the one
I have found you

I want you
Need you
Forever and ever more

Still knowing all this
I am still sad
Because I wake up each day
Without you here

Knowing I long for
Your sweet kiss
Your soft embrace
Is a wish

Those amazing eyes
For which I desire
I get so weak in the knees
When I catch that glance

Knowing what just might be...

Please Diane take this journey with me
I know it is early
But I see so clearly

Knowing now

That we were meant to be....

[This message has been edited by nate15106 (01-01-2013 07:38 PM).]

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2013-01-01 06:04 PM

I hope you sent this to "Diane"... it is a sweet outpouring of love and desire.

Again, welcome to the blues pages, Nate~

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2013-01-01 06:24 PM

Welcome Nate, I hope it works out for you and Diane and keep writing. Enjoyed reading.

~Victoria

Life is a great big canvas-Throw all the paint on it you can.
-- Danny Kaye

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

3 posted 2013-01-01 07:19 PM

Beautiful heart-felt poem! I hope Diane feels the same. Good luck in your pursuit of love.
Kat >^..^<

nate15106
Junior Member

since 2013-01-01

Posts 11
Pittsburgh, PA

4 posted 2013-01-01 07:34 PM

Thanks everyone....I did send it to Diane she is going through some things...I just have to understand and be patient. But I can't help but think she is going to rip my heart out of my chest

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2013-01-01 10:13 PM

Nate,

Welcome to Passions! Please, check your email for a Very special email!

Good luck!

"The business of the poet...is to show the sorriness underlying the grandest things and the grandeur underlying the sorriest things." Thomas Hardy

nate15106
Junior Member

since 2013-01-01

Posts 11
Pittsburgh, PA

6 posted 2013-01-02 05:27 PM

Thank you...Loved seeing this pictured that way

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2013-01-05 02:01 AM

Wonderful...James

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2013-01-05 11:12 AM

Be patient and sincere

Wishing you the best in the New Year

M

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

9 posted 2013-01-13 06:01 PM

Sincere and crisp. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and feelings here. TD

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