Open Poetry #48 |
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I Wear You |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
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I Wear You like Sweet grapes of wine lingering on tip of my tongue. A Cherished Locket, close to the beating of my heart. I Wear You like A Purple Orchid laced with mountain rain, adorned in flaxen hair. A Gentle Kiss of a magnolia breeze, in the afterglow of love. I Wear You like A Silk Sarong over the shoulder, of a memory. I Wear You Bathing in the fragrance Blue Forget- Me- Nots Bouquet. Life is a great big canvas-Throw all the paint on it you can. -- Danny Kaye |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I Wear You like A Silk Sarong over the shoulder, of a memory. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Absolutely beautiful, V!!!! I'm so loving those lines... your poetry is a breath of fresh air...and then some. Hugs~ |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Lori and lots of happiness in the new year and good fortune to you too. I do appreciate your sweet and supportive comments. Hugss!! ![]() ~Victoria |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
oh my lord Victoria, that is one of the sweeter things ive read in.. well forever.. your heart is a bloom.. with cherish and enchantment, flourishing forth amour, and allurement.. wonderful this, and the hand that penned it.. you brought this year to a divine consumation.. with balm and bouquet, lingering.. ever so how nice to share another year, in gift of treasured, and endearing thoughts.. 2013, its almost here! ![]() |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Now how can I top that response Richy. Impossible...Your responses are so much better then my poems ha! Hope you have a great new years eve. I hope you stick around here and keep on tangoing ha. ![]() |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
hahah you are so funny.. well i do come and go rather frequently but i always do come back to bother you all from time to time whether you like it or not lol.. in the meanwhile, as far as that dance is concerned, it still takes two to do it justice yes.. so take my my hands now and lets dance whats left of this year away.. the moon is peaking behind a cloud.. but the darkness is winking its starry night.. ![]() |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I can't find a dress with a split up the side...I don't know what to do. ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
so sweet |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
hey dont make me rip it with my teeth cause i will.. oh dang, i just cut my lipth on thth roseth buthsh hahaha.. ![]() |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Ms Shadows, Happy new year to you and yours. Nice to hear from you. Richy...It sounds like you had too many sangrias haa. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
I'm truly sorry Victoria if i went too far, no sangria here, i've actually been sick in bed for the last two days, i just get caught up in all the revery sometimes.. if i was disrespectful in anyway i sincerely apologize and i hope you can forgive me |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Lovely poem, enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Kat and Happy New Year to you and yours. Richy...I hope you feel better, no you werent disrespectful. You had me laughing. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
oh okay.. whewww! haha.. thanks Victoria i was worried that i might have offended you.. i will promise to not go soooo overboard though next time okay.. did i ever tell you that you're the best, because you are! Hey it's 2013! How nice it is to be able to start, another year, especially with such nice folks as you and everyone else here at Pip Have a wonderful day! ![]() |
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nate15106 Junior Member
since 2013-01-01
Posts 11Pittsburgh, PA |
I really enjoyed this poem. Very beautiful |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ah, much enjoyed this, my friend ... nice concept! j. |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Nate..Thank you for reading and I am so glad you enjoyed. Happy New Year ![]() Jimmy..It is always nice to hear from you. ![]() Life is a great big canvas-Throw all the paint on it you can. |
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