Open Poetry #48 |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan ![]() |
. Early night A light Blue moon On winter snow No doubt as before There are rabbits Playing in the fields And deer in the forest Moving among the trees Our rooms are warm The wine is good We feel no need To go outside Alone together We are home In rocking chairs We bought so very long ago A pair of sparrows Under wooden eaves . |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Sounds nice and cozy indeed. Nice and serene. Enjoyed. Happy New Year ![]() ~Victoria Life is a great big canvas-Throw all the paint on it you can. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sounds like here, without the contentment |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
enjoyed as always, my friend. j. |
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Duck1946 Member
since 2011-05-16
Posts 84Nebraska |
Lovely, creates a picture. I really liked the two sparrows part. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I really enjoyed this one. -Juju |
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