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Reason to Be
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Reason to Be |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Reason to Be Only True Love’s finest moments give 'Time' any meaning, remaining in memory both ‘moving’....yet immovable, not desiring....but desirable, anchoring self within selflessness. We are as the Phoenix ... able to rise again by new love from the ashes of burned roses mid sounds of distant mandolins with notes in sliding harmony and chords of liquid passion burning like fire and moonlight ... Love is yet the 'reason to be!' --- b. e. adams(12/30/2012) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Such beautiful words you have written, I truly loved it. ~Victoria Life is a great big canvas-Throw all the paint on it you can. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
mid sounds of distant mandolins with notes in sliding harmony and chords of liquid passion ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Dang!! This is passion in it's purest form. Just beautiful, dreampoet!!!! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A waltz upon the page. Nicely done. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
The romance and belief in ever lasting love is tangible with this write. Memories of love are sharper in the mind than 30 seconds ago and while we have such memories we can still have hope when sometimes all seems lost, love is the salve of this crazy world. Thank you for reminding me....with these fine words... Goldenrose. music was my refuge.i could crawl into the spaces between the notes and curl my back to loneliness - Maya Angelou |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Love it! Very beautiful, enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
This is a very beautiful poem, Bruce. Fortunately for me (giggles), I don't share your opinion because if I did, and I was dependent on somebody loving me for being happy and having a reason to live, I would have been miserable every moment of my life and I would never have had a reason to live - lol and more giggles! I know my silly words can't spoil the beautiful ambiance and message of your poem, or I would never had said them. Owl |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thanks to all you grand-fine and tremendously talented folks for your comments on my ever-most-humble little 'poetic scribbles!' |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
This must have been posted on a day I was not around. Sorry to have missed it.A very lovely worded song of love that was or can yet to be. best ,jo |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
deep and true, the way you unveil feelings is wonderful, harmonious, thanks for the very enjoyable read, yann |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I believe this is one of, if not "the" best poems I have ever red of yours, Bruce. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very nice that Jerry brought this up to the top again, giving me the opportunity to enjoy it, deeply so. Love allows spirit to bloom, like water allows life to exist. Most beautiful. Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Awesome. Love is 'reason to be' ...as well as being the reason for 'being'... CG |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Youn are the master of lovely, classic romantic poetry, Bruce. Ida |
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