Eternal Cosmic Dance (re-worked)

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Open Poetry #48

Eternal Cosmic Dance (re-worked)

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2012-12-28 08:28 PM

        Eternal Cosmic Dance

In the silver evening twilight
mid a flight of soft-edged dreams,
(that mingle with the rising moon)
there comes a memory-time of
  song and sorrow,
to cast off all the fleeting days
and bygone years with no regret,
for they have passed you by.
Do not tarry long with memories
   and unyielding sorrows;
simply join instead in celebration
   of the glorious now
with 100 billion galaxies
in Nature's eternal cosmic dance.

                             --- b. e. adams

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2012-12-28 09:29 PM

there comes a memory-time of
  song and sorrow,
to cast off all the fleeting days
and bygone years with no regret
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Those lines are my favorite, but your entire poem gives me hope and
reminds me to live in the here and now, it is God's gift to each one of us.

Onward into the New Year~~

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2012-12-29 12:56 PM

the universe makes humble, we have so much to meditate and contemplate , the poem has great intensity about it, loved it ,
yann

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