Open Poetry #48 |
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boroughs of the brown/blonde hair from the window seal |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
She had a soft like neck that seemed to run around the base of his long arms for her heart was settled between the side of his sweater and the tears of his face Blonde, brown streaks falling under the raptures of the wind like the stolen rocks that lay underneath their home as she, like a soft kiss, touched his eyes rinsed the denim off his jeans onto the flaccid floor He used her lips for a slow smile to keep the snow at bay as her neck tilted into his chest like the shallow cotton sweater she wore over her white tee He read the lines from her eyes until a small scrap of her nails seemed to scratch at the back of his neck until the mark felt a nights hollow corner Through the night under a long silent sigh he caught her eyes fall for a softened man with his eyes tucked away like the snow covered plains of the midwest. lips touching the the bottom a radiant tide of the moon on their side and for a moment, it all felt right for a moment, a little rise of her eyes came under the touch of his lips the small windows heart felt the truth of a dozen seeds that shaded the bedroom wooden floor to the soft kernels of her breasts behind the curtains graceful stare. [This message has been edited by Tomer (12-28-2012 03:01 PM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Through the night under a long silent sigh he caught her eyes fall for a softened man with his eyes tucked away like the plains of the midwest as the snow covered the ground each year ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I love that verse! Your poetry is like a dream, Tomer. I'm always a fan!!! |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Blues- I'm happy it took you there.....a dream is always a reality to me, sometimes. Hope you're well. Cheers Tomer |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Fluid magic, Tomer! Owl |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
it works like a dream, a fortunate meet, lived your images ans sweet words, thanks yann |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Enjoyed the window view, Tomer. Ms. E |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Owl- Thank you, kindly. Take care. Cheers Tomer |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Yann- I'm happy you enjoyed it. I hope you're doing well, bud. Take care. Cheers Tomer |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Ms. E- Happy you liked the picture. Take care. Cheers Tomer |
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