Open Poetry #48 |
Adam To Eve |
Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Adam To Eve You open the Eden of my fullness your fingers speak through my lips I hear the thoughts of your woman and I am easy eager the consequence that lingers. Temptation combs its hair in your want it breathes the longing of forbidden and in it's cunning it stitches the scar secrets in your tree limbs pregnant with apples. You are the wet scissor teeth it knows my willing from taste - the liquid song of sin spilling from mouth tears of regret; It slithers through veins serpentine of us f a l l i n g inside the fall. I am you in love with yourself I am you seeking your own love we are the storm not the raindrops, the wing not the feathers and while we used to cleave to unknowing it is ourselves now to which we cling. Innocence - a fragrance one cannot rebottle, so shall a clear mirror resent being polished. Hindsight is a heavy hand of a rose that embraces the thorns sharpness of a thorn that cannot comprehend the sweetness. Yea, even the hunter who has caught the shadow of the bird will never become it’s freedom. I feel the snake when I'm breathing your water and your air and I curl up in the lap of confusion to nurse at the breast of your despair. By Melissa Long-Monette "Poetry is not an opinion expressed. It |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Absolutely LOVED this, my friend!! Merry Christmas to you and yours.... j. |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
The storm....not the raindrops. The wing...not the feathers....how poetic is that?????? You haven't lost a thing, cutie patootie |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
fantastic, every word is great and surprising, loved it very much, yann |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Innocence - a fragrance one cannot rebottle, Enjoyed, a lovely thought indeed Honeybee. ~Victoria~ Life is a great big canvas-Throw all the paint on it you can. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
So much to like here. Really nice to see your name on the blue page again. Happy New year, Honeybee~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very nice, deep from a distance, but clear. Excellent read, enjoyed. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Wow! Quite the poem, Honeybee. Ida |
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Ethern Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 150on a plane |
the title drew me in because i often use a signatural element of role-play to accentuate the "gist" of many of my works, with Adam and Eve being one of those. while i couldn't formulate one complete imagination to illustrate this abstract write (i am most impressed by poetry that invokes powerful imagery), i think that it is that same incoherence that forms the unique character that makes this poem so artistic. it is the flippant toying with concepts that makes this a fascinating and fun read. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Too many excellent lines to choose only a few. I like the all of this, spilling down the page like the perfume of linger. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
oh my... just doing some browsing here tonight and came across this... wow!! The thoughts, the words, the flow... just wow!! Quite the write here Melissa.. been quite some time since I've read you.. too long!! You can never win or lose |
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