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Open Poetry #48

California In The Rearview

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

0 posted 2012-12-22 09:24 PM

I left a little girl with big bright eyes
looking for me in the morning,
calling out for her grandma
who was gone with no warning.

I left her pictures and movies
so her memories will not blur,
she isn't old enough to understand
but I also left my heart with her.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

1 posted 2012-12-22 10:31 PM

Ah, my friend ... my heart to you . . .

jimmy

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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a 'Universalist' !

2 posted 2012-12-22 11:20 PM

She's a super-cutie !

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

3 posted 2012-12-23 03:25 AM

That little one sure is a heart stealer!
Enjoyed,
Ms. E

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

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California

4 posted 2012-12-23 07:36 PM

Lovelyness!!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2012-12-24 10:35 PM

Very nice writing...James

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

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lost in blue pages

6 posted 2012-12-26 08:20 AM

smiles and enjoyed the poem
think many grannies can relate to this
:hug:

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

7 posted 2012-12-26 01:10 PM

Dixie, she will be writing soon.Send her little grandmother poems and get her started.

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

8 posted 2012-12-26 02:26 PM

this is very emotional moment, in and outside poetry, thanks

yann

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